WALT Compose a poem about the waterslide
Waterslide
I couldn’t go on the Waterslide but I saw the howls of laughter from the children who did. Once they had slid down they came out like muddy pigs, it was hilarious. Everyone swam down in different positions with screams of excitment. I was hysterical.
Monday 12 November 2018
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Bonjour Tweeny,
ReplyDeleteIt's Siale from St.Bernadette's School. I really enjoyed reading your poem about the water slide. I really liked the part where you said "Once they had slid down they came out like muddy pigs" that really made me laugh. This reminded me of when I went down that water slide and I did come out like a muddy pig. Why weren't you able to go on the water slide? Keep up the great work Tweeny!
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is amazing.
The poem is really good Tweeny.
Maybe next time you could change the color of the writing?
Kind regards Jorja.