The date was the 13th of september, my 345th birthday was going to be my last. I decided it was time to fight, my mortal enemy. I am forbidden to say his name. All I can say is that he took my fame and they threw me away from their land and now it is time to fight. It is my birthday today and I was left on this land for 45 years. So I finally fixed my thrusters and decided to fly to their land and show them how it feels to be unwanted. I went to the mall where he performs.
“HEY!” I growled. “YOU WILL FIGHT ME IN A BATTLE OF FAME”. “ And who are you?” ________ said. I grew angrier and angrier by the minute. Everytime he spoke I felt anger. “YOU KNOW WHO I AM” I yelled.”I WAS TRAPPED ON A ISLAND FOR 45 YEARS AND YOU PUT ME THERE”. I threw a punch at him to show I am ready to fight. The battle began. It felt like forever that we were fighting.”IT’S EITHER FIGHT OR DIE TRYING” I said with confidence. finally got my revenge and won. “ You are no match for greatness like me” I said. I could not believe it. And this was the end of my revenge.
Written By Tweeny
(I couldn’t come up with names for them, but maybe you could comment a name an I will pick two to name them)
Friday, 7 December 2018
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Kia ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because it is a really really good story because it has a lot of detail in it.
The detail you have used is really good.
I like how you made some of the words in it BOLD.
The name I would put in is Ethan or Bella.