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Tuesday 18 September 2018

My Neighbour

There are three important rules you should live by to survive. First, Always look over your shoulder, Second, never trust anyone and third Beware your Neighbours. I was Walking home on friday from school, and I saw my neighbour, Mr Bean. “howdy” he said. “ hi?” I Said with a confused face. He has never spoken to me before. “I made a clubhouse here, want to see it? I said yes. “ I don’t see anything “ I said with disbelief. “You have to be more observant”. I went closer and I saw a door leading to underground. I went inside and he gave me something to eat and drink. “It is getting late i need to go” I Said. “ I don’t want you to go”. I panicked, I was so scared. I wondered what might happen, Then I rushed to the ladder and tried to climb up and he was pulling me down and I hit my head on the floor and I pushed him and climbed out and I was in pain but i had to keep going because he rushed after me. And I saw my sister and ran to her and I told her what happened and we ran inside and he was pounding on the door and my dad was keeping it shut while my mum called the police. I put my family in danger so I kept thinking what to do. I found my Dad’s Shooting room where the guns are. I grabbed a gun and shot him. Then the police came and arrested him. I felt way better. And I will never forget that dead look on his face.

1 comment:

  1. This story was based on a movie called Lovely Bones!

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