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Thursday, 14 November 2019

Hello?

WALT write a story about what ever you want

A writing time today, we had to write a story about what ever we wanted. There's not much to explain. Just that we did free writing. My story is called "Hello?"

Hope you enjoy!

Me and my friends were just walking around a park and I saw a dirty house. It was dirty and crusty with cobwebs and broken windows. I told my friends I had to go to the toilet and they said okay. I headed straight to the dirty house. I was so scared that I couldn’t breathe. I tried to push myself to go in there but I just couldn’t. As soon as I started to walk away, I heard a loud BANG! I turned around and put a serious face on and went inside. 

The door closed behind me. There was two stairways. There were a lot of spiders and cobwebs. There were three bookshelves too. One upstairs and two near the door I came in from. It was very creepy and brisk. I went upstairs and looked at the bookshelf and saw something coming from underneath. I touched it and it looked like BLOOD. 

I was so freaked out I ran down the stairs screaming. I tried to open the door but it was locked somehow. I tried to break it open. I grabbed a chair and threw it at the door. It didn’t break. Then I heard someone. “Hello?”. I turned around. “Is someone here?”. It sounded like a man. I tiptoed and tried not to make any sound. Then he came.

A tall figure stood in front of me. His blood dripped from his legs and arms. “GET OUT OF MY HOUSE” He screamed. I ran to the door and tried to open it every way possible. He ran to the door. Finally, the door opened. He nearly got me but I ran out of the house and slammed the door shut. I ran back to the park. 

My friends were still there. “Why did you take so long” One of my friends said. “Did you have diarrhea or something”. I laughed. Me and my friends started walking home. Then I screamed. I saw him there. The man. He just stood there. With this nasty look on his face. “ What’s wrong?” My friend said. “Nothing” I said shaking.  Luckily, my friends didn’t notice the house. I promised myself to Never. Go. There. Again.

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