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Friday 15 December 2017

Complaint To Santa

WALT Write a complaint to Santa as an elf


Dear Santa, It’s me, the leader of all elves, Candy Cane Ice Spice . I am TIRED of you telling me to do more work than others. The way to resolve this problem would be to let me go with you on your sleigh. Also give me FOOD. If you don’t I WILL QUIIIIIIIT. Thank you for your time here at the north pole.

Kind Regards, Tweeny

4 comments:

  1. Hi Tweeny,

    This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!

    This is a funny post :) Reading this made me happy and all excited for Christmas! I also think that Candy Cane Ice Spice need some break from work and go on a holiday like us! I'm going away to Napier with my family! How about you?

    I would love to blog with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!

    All the best,

    Jade C

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  2. ello I am from wigram, and a flippen good job to you, that was extremely funny hahahahahahhahahaaha, excuse my laughter but it was funny. a little tip would be to add a colourful background.

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    1. Thank you for your feedback i will

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  3. Hi there, I'm Abby and i'm a year 6 student at Yaldhurst Model School or you can say YMS.

    I liked the way you you added in a photo of Santa.

    Did you think of explaining why you made this.

    To improve you could maybe make the letter longer and look more like a letter.

    Kind Regards, Abby.

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